when i was in 3rd semester my writing 2 teacher ask me why we are deserve to get a or b in writing 3 ?
then she askd us to make an essay about that and here what i have made. There was no correct for grammar . so i hope there who wants to correct it.

Why I Deserve Get A or B in Writing 2?

            Writing 2 is the one of subject for the third semester in English department and continued from writing 1 in the second semester.  In writing 1 I have been tried my best but I got C in writing 1. I think I am not trying my best when I am in the second semester but I hope I can do it better in the third semester. I deserve that I get A or B in writing 2 because I don’t want to repeat my mistake when I was in the second semester and I will do my best to get A or B in this semester.

            When I was in the second semester I got C in writing 1. I am not good at writing but I really don’t want to get C in my writing again. I felt very bad when I know that my writing got C. I think I did not do my best for writing 1. I will improve my writing skill just now.

            In this third semester I will try my best for get A or B in writing 2. In writing skill we have to good at structure and reading for add our vocabulary. Writing skill is very important because many jobs require you to express yourself clearly in writing. I have to study hard to have good writing skill and get A or B in writing 2.

            In conclusion, my previews value in writing 1 makes me want to change my habit in study for writing 2. I will do my best for this semester to get A or b in writing 2 and make me deserve to get A or B in this subject. I don’t want to make the same mistake like in writing 1. All of the hard work and serious there must be a good result.