my assignment from writing class

i just want to share my assignment that i have collect to my teacher,,,,
i put what i thought about corporal punishment..
we don't have to take corporal punishment just from negative side, but you also have to see it in positive side and that what i have in my writing ...
check this out..

CORPORAL PUNISHMENT IN EDUCATION

Corporal punishment is a sanction that is given to somebody who is wrong by giving pain to his or her body. Corporal punishment is usually used in education especially in school. Teachers will give corporal punishment to their students if the students do something wrong. Many kinds of corporal punishment the teachers use such as spanking their hands, punching or hitting their butt. Many parents think that corporal punishment will make their children hurt though. Actually, if the teachers do corporal punishment with certain rules, it will make the corporal punishment effective. So, corporal punishment is a good way to educate the children. 

Today many students and children behave badly in school. They can break the rules at the school and do not listen to their teacher. Teacher gives advice to them but they do not want to listen. So, the last way to make them listen to their teacher is by giving corporal punishment. By giving corporal punishment, the students will not do the same mistake again. They will think that what they have done is wrong. Corporal punishment will

Corporal punishment will make the students obedient to the teacher and to the rules in the school. Corporal punishment will help teachers to make students become discipline. In a class, there are 25 until 30 students. The teachers have responsibility to make the all of the students discipline in the school. So, if one of the students breaks the rules or not discipline, the teacher can do corporal punishment to him or her.

Corporal punishment can hurt the students physic. Many parents are afraid that their children will get hurt if the teachers give them corporal punishment. Actually, if the students or their children are not doing wrong, they will not get corporal punishment and if they do, they will. So, the parents should not be afraid about that because in school there are restrictions for the teacher to do corporal punishment to the students. In school, corporal punishment has a purpose to make students discipline in school.

Some people believe that corporal punishment will make the students became an aggressive and hated person. They think that if the teachers do corporal punishment to their students that will make the students imitate what their teacher did.  Actually, it happens because the teachers do corporal punishment profuse. So, that is only makes the students are being an aggressive and hated person, but also hurt the students. The teachers should do corporal punishment without emotion that will make the corporal punishment becomes the effective way to educate the students.

In conclusion, corporal punishment will make the students wary and be obedient to teachers and the rules in school. Corporal punishment will not hurt and make the students become aggressive and hated persons if the teachers do it right. For example, Some students in Africa just laughed when they got spanking by their teacher. Corporal punishment is an effective way to educate the children. The government should place corporal punishment effectively.

i hope i can pass writing 2 class this semester..

aminn..